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((EDIT: Now with character qualities and character flaw charts under 'Personality!' Check it out, it'll help the building of your character's personalities! ALSO- added a guide for OC's who have skirts!))
A semi-tutorial on how to get started or improve upon a Hetalia OC. Includes (in no particular order):
    • Lists of countries AND micro-nations
    • Reasons for not giving an OC a disorder
    • Appearance tips.
    • Color coding/scheme tips.
    • History format tips.
    • Personality tips.
    • Relationship tips.

    Lets get started! Keep in mind that this is a combination of some prior guide journals and new, added tips!

    So you want to make a Hetalia  OC?

    That's good! Lets pick a country first, yeah? Then we can get to work on the aspects and history.
      Picked one? Good! Now, lets get started on the basics.

      Appearance, Ethnicity, History

      :bulletred:Make your design unique. This doesn't go to say that your OC looks unique in the sense that it looks nothing like the ethnicity of their people (i.e. Albino countries in which the mass populous is actually tanned). Look up images of people from that country, be it famous or common people of that country.
      :bulletred:Have them dress appropriately for their country's social formality customs! The same goes with their personality.
      :bulletred:Do not start their history from when they were colonized if they have history that extends before colonization! Ancient countries deserve more recognition than being the 'child' of their colonizer.


      :bulletred: Even out their faults and strengths. 'Ditzy' and 'Clumsy' are the absolute worst and more cliche 'faults' to use. Be more creative! Do they constantly strive for approval? Are easily unsettled? Easily angered (and not in the tsun-tsun way but in a literal rage-fit)? When considering the personality, pay heed to how people of their country act and are known for.
      :bulletred:This brings us to stereo-types. While Hetalia does boast a plethora and rather weighty array of stereo-types for each country, there is a bit of a 'border' on what is considered an 'okay' stereo-type or and insulting stereo-type. 100% Mafia Sicily? Insulting. Kawaii Desu Tokyo/any Japanese Hetalia OC? No. Please refrain. 

      Here's some nifty charts on character qualities,character flaws, traits, and how to balance them out!

      :bulletred:Lets not forget 'disorders' which people try to make into a large chunk of their OC's personalities and their one and only 'fault'. Lets go into why you shouldn't do this and what each disorder actually is.

      Please, stop or at least do your research! It is highly disrespectful to people who actually suffer from such disorders. The main disorders that people tend to use and misinterpret: Stockholm Syndrom and Schizophrenia.

      Let's look at them medically. To be blunt, it is extremely cruel to give your OC a disorder for kicks because such disorders cause a horrible amount of suffering and are hell to live through.

      Commonly Misrepresented Disorders

      Stockholm Syndrome:a psychological phenomenon in which hostages express empathy and sympathy and have positive feelings toward their captors, sometimes to the point of defending them. These feelings are generally considered irrational in light of the danger or risk endured by the victims, who essentially mistake a lack of abuse from their captors for an act of kindness. The FBI's Hostage Barricade Database System shows that roughly 27% of victims show evidence of Stockholm syndrome.
      The term, Stockholm Syndrome, was coined in the early 70's to describe the puzzling reactions of four bank employees to their captor. On August 23, 1973, three women and one man were taken hostage in one of the largest banks in Stockholm. They were held for six days by two ex-convicts who threatened their lives but also showed them kindness. To the world's surprise, all of the hostages strongly resisted the government's efforts to rescue them and were quite eager to defend their captors. Indeed, several months after the hostages were saved by the police, they still had warm feelings for the men who threatened their lives. Two of the women eventually got engaged to the captors.
      Stockholm Syndrome is a survival mechanism. The men and women who get it are not lunatics. They are fighting for their lives

      Let's go over why this is messed up to use for your Hetalia OC, stall we?

      First: Its' basically loving someone for giving you physical and mental agony and not always abusing you. Its' sad, not Romantic. People who actually suffer such a sensation deserve compassion and empathy, not having their condition crudely replicated by a two-bit creator and their attempt to justify their Pairing/OTP. 
      Second: Most people who use this syndrome in their OC profiles say that "EVEN THO =insert nation name here= RAPED =insert OC name here=, =insert oc name here= STILL LUVS THEM AND THEYRE TOGETHER 4VR". Let me repeat what I said from my prior journal:

      Imperialism, Colonization, and 'Invasion' are NOT synonymous with rape.

      Now for Schizophrenia.

      Schizophrenia: a group of severe brain disorders in which people interpret reality abnormally. Schizophrenia may result in some combination of hallucinations, delusions, and disordered thinking and behavior.
      Contrary to some popular belief, schizophrenia isn't split personality or multiple personality. The word "schizophrenia" does mean "split mind," but it refers to a disruption of the usual balance of emotions and thinking.
      Schizophrenia is a chronic condition, requiring lifelong treatment.  Schizophrenia is a psychotic disorder (or a group of disorders) marked by severely impaired thinking, emotions, and behaviors. Schizophrenic patients are typically unable to filter sensory stimuli and may have enhanced perceptions of sounds, colors, and other features of their environment. Most schizophrenics, if untreated, gradually withdraw from interactions with other people, and lose their ability to take care of personal needs and grooming. There are different types ofn Schizophrenia.

      The key feature of this subtype of schizophrenia is the combination of false beliefs (delusions) and hearing voices (auditory hallucinations), with more nearly normal emotions and cognitive functioning (cognitive functions include reasoning, judgment, and memory). The delusions of paranoid schizophrenics usually involve thoughts of being persecuted or harmed by others or exaggerated opinions of their own importance, but may also reflect feelings of jealousy or excessive religiosity. The delusions are typically organized into a coherent framework. Paranoid schizophrenics function at a higher level than other subtypes, but are at risk for suicidal or violent behavior under the influence of their delusions.

      Disorganized schizophrenia (formerly called hebephrenic schizophrenia) is marked by disorganized speech, thinking, and behavior on the patient's part, coupled with flat or inappropriate emotional responses to a situation (affect). The patient may act silly or withdraw socially to an extreme extent. Most patients in this category have weak personality structures prior to their initial acute psychotic episode.

      Catatonic schizophrenia is characterized by disturbances of movement that may include rigidity, stupor, agitation, bizarre posturing, and repetitive imitations of the movements or speech of other people. These patients are at risk for malnutrition, exhaustion, or self-injury. This subtype is presently uncommon in Europe and the United States. Catatonia as a symptom is most commonly associated with mood disorders.

      Patients in this category have the characteristic positive and negative symptoms of schizophrenia but do not meet the specific criteria for the paranoid, disorganized, or catatonic subtypes.

      This category is used for patients who have had at least one acute schizophrenic episode but do not presently have strong positive psychotic symptoms, such as delusions and hallucinations. They may have negative symptoms, such as withdrawal from others, or mild forms of positive symptoms, which indicate that the disorder has not completely resolved.
      The risk of schizophrenia among first-degree biological relatives is ten times greater than that observed in the general population. Furthermore the presence of the same disorder is higher in monozygotic twins (identical twins) than in dizygotic twins (nonidentical twins). The research concerning adoption studies and identical twins also supports the notion that environmental factors are important, because not all relatives who have the disorder express it. There are several chromosomes and loci (specific areas on chromosomes which contain mutated genes), which have been identified. Research is actively ongoing to elucidate the causes, types and variations of these mutations.
      Most patients are diagnosed in their late teens or early twenties, but the symptoms of schizophrenia can emerge at any age in the life cycle. The male/female ratio in adults is about 1.2:1. Male patients typically have their first acute episode in their early twenties, while female patients are usually closer to age 30 when they are recognized with active symptoms.
      Schizophrenia is rarely diagnosed in preadolescent children, although patients as young as five or six have been reported. Childhood schizophrenia is at the upper end of the spectrum of severity and shows a greater gender disparity. It affects one or two children in every 10,000; the male/female ratio is 2:1.
      Causes and symptoms

      Now lets discuss why it is insensitive and distasteful to say your Hetalia OC has Schizophrenia.

      First: It is not the same as multiple personality disorder. Having Schizophrenia does not mean your OC can see magical creatures like England. In most cases of Schizophrenia, you are slowly or rapidly loosing yourself.
      Second: Its' basically making your OC have constant psychological episodes. They would be living in acute paranoia and torment. People who actually have Schizophrenia have a very hard time in life. 
      Third: This does not define for your OC being Yandere. No. Just. No.

      Now, I touched on 'multiple personality disorder'. This disorder is also frequently misinterpreted, misrepresented, and disrespected. Lets take a look on what this disorder really is. 

      Multiple Personality Disorder: Also known as Dissociative Identity Disorder, it is not the same as 'Split mind disorder' [Schizophrenia]. MPD/DID symptoms:

      Amnesia in DID is marked by gaps in the patient's memory for long periods of their past, in some cases, their entire childhood. Most DID patients have amnesia, or "lose time," for periods when another personality is "out." They may report finding items in their house that they can't remember having purchased, finding notes written in different handwriting, or other evidence of unexplained activity.
      Depersonalization is a dissociative symptom in which the patient feels that his or her body is unreal, is changing, or is dissolving. Some DID patients experience depersonalization as feeling to be outside of their body, or as watching a movie of themselves.

      Derealization is a dissociative symptom in which the patient perceives the external environment as unreal. Patients may see walls, buildings, or other objects as changing in shape, size, or color. DID patients may fail to recognize relatives or close friends.

      :bulletred:Identity disturbances:
      Identity disturbances in DID result from the patient's having split off entire personality traits or characteristics as well as memories. When a stressful or traumatic experience triggers the reemergence of these dissociated parts, the patient switches—usually within seconds—into an alternate personality. Some patients have histories of erratic performance in school or in their jobs caused by the emergence of alternate personalities during examinations or other stressful situations. Patients vary with regard to their alters' awareness of one another.

      Once more, we will discuss why it is wrong to misrepresent this disorder.

      First: You are forgetting who you are.  You can't figure out who you are. You forget who you love.
      Second: Since derealization is a symptom, you may loose your grasp on visual reality. That would be terrifying. You suddenly have a massive amount of splintered memories and different names with complete personalities trapped in one body fighting for control. What is so 'kawaii' about fighting your own mind?!! Identity disturbances will seriously affect your life and possibly hurt you or those around you/care about you. This isn't cute or creative to put as a representation for a whole country. Its' stating that the country has a severe mental problem as a whole.
      Third: YES, countries, cities, capitals, etc. each have a large amount of different traits due to the people living there, but this does not mean that you can/should give your OC such a disorder. How does giving your OC a mental problem make it unique? It doesn't. Its' just offensive to those who actually suffer form the disorder.

      I feel like the topic will eventually arise, I'm going to also put the definition of Tsundere, Yandere, and Kuudere as well as touch on Phobias.

      Tsundere:The progression of a character personality from cold and hostile to eventually displaying their warm and loving side, also rather abusive to the one they hold in affection.

      Yandere: Seemingly sweet and mellow but very dangerous and violent in reality.

      Kuudere: Appears to be blank and cold, but is secretly sweet and kind.

      I mentioned these three in particular because they are the most common 'character traits' new-comers to the fandom give their OC's. Now, its alright to use these sparingly and only as an opaque part of their personality. Flesh out your OC. Make them appealing by having them historically accurate and refer to what the people of your OC's country are known for.

      Philippines: Hospitable and cheery, very welcoming.
      Khmer: Constantly smiling, even when uncomfortable.

      Now for Phobias. Please, please, properly research a Phobia and ensure that it makes sense with your OC and their history. Now, do not make the Phobia so intense that they have a whole episode of terror because of it. If you must give your OC a Phobia, make it subtle.

      Lastly, I want to touch on the 'double standard' of OC's.
      Just because an OC is female does not mean she is a Sue. Moreover, the assumption that all Philippine OC's are Sue/Stus is rather foolish. For each country/state/city/micronation, there will always be a fair amount of of deplorable or poorly done OC's. Do not pin on a singular country etc. as the complete and utter basis for a 'mary-sue'.

      Color coding/creating a color profile

      This goes for all OC's in general, not just Hetalia OC's. Therefore, I'm going to be splitting this journal between Hetalia OC's and other genre OC's.
      First, lets start for basic color scheme.

      Hair, Eyes, and Skin

      When creating your OC, be sure that all aspects fit with their ethnicity [race/nationality]. Typically, darker skinned characters have dark hair. Now, this isn't saying that all dark skinned OC's have to have dark hair, however, this is the basis for Hetalia OC's. In brief: make sure the skin and hair fit if the OC is representing a province/state/city/country. This also goes for the eyes! Do the eyes [if a Hetalia OC] represent something? I.E. Diverse forest ecosystem=green or something or other? That may be acceptable with Latin and Middle Eastern OC's. Shades of greens and browns are varied over there because of different influences. Here's an example of green Middle Eastern Eyes:

      But keep in mind that most have dark brown eyes. Moreover, it is highly disapproved of if you give your character extremely light hair and skin pigment  if they represent a darker toned country. It doesn't matter if they were colonized, depict them as their actual people and ethnicity look. An arian/albino Africa or Latin America OC is unacceptable, nor is a blazing blonde one with sky blue eyes that contradict what people from that country actually look like.
      And above all, avoid Heterochromia iridum with neko ears.
      This brings us to our next topic of color schemes: two toned eyes.

      Two Toned Eyes

      The most common [and poorly portrayed] example of this is Heterochromia iridum. Heterochromia is a result of the relative excess or lack of melanin (a pigment). It may be inherited, or caused by genetic mosaicism, chimerism, disease, or injury. This does not go to say that you can validly say your APH OC has two toned eyes because of their colonizers. You don't gain eye colors by meeting people. In humans, usually, an excess of melanin indicates hyperplasia of the iris tissues, whereas a lack of melanin indicates hypoplasia. Moreover one eye tends to be weaker than the other. Acquired heterochromia [which most people try to use to validate their OC having two toned eyes] can be caused by injury, inflammation that caused mass scarring, or a tumor.
      There are variations of Heterochromia.
      One, when the iris is abnormally darker, is characterized by injury. Blunt truama to the eye will not only impare it, but darken the pigment. Here are some variants of that.

      :bulletblue:Deposition of material Siderosis – iron deposition within ocular tissues due to a penetrating injury and a retained iron-containing, intraocular foreign body.

      :bulletblue: Hemosiderosis – long standing hyphema (blood in the anterior chamber) following blunt trauma to the eye may lead to iron deposition from blood products

      :bulletblue:Certain eyedrops – prostaglandin analogues (latanoprost, isopropyl unoprostone, travoprost, and bimatoprost) are used topically to lower intraocular pressure in glaucoma patients. A concentric heterochromia has developed in some patients applying these drugs. The stroma around the iris sphincter muscle becomes darker than the peripheral stroma. A stimulation of melanin synthesis within iris melanocytes has been postulated.

      :bulletblue: Neoplasm – Nevi and melanomatous tumors.

      :bulletblue:Iridocorneal endothelium syndrome

      :bulletblue: Iris ectropion syndrome

      There are also cases were one iris is lighter than the other. Though it is subtle and occurs naturally, it can actually develop over time due to diseases like Duane syndrome and Leukemia.
      Central Heterochromia is actually more common than either of those two in modern life.
      Here's an example of Central Heterochromia:

      So, in brief, heterochromia in Hetalia OC's is not advised in the slightest, and Heterochromia in OC's of other fandoms should be done carefully. Neon green and red eyes or purple and pink would be very tacky and unacceptable.
      Now, on to clothing colors!

      Clothing Colors and Proper use of Personality Schemes

      If your OC is a Hetalian, it is important to have an accurate depiction of what people in that country wear, both for casual and traditional clothing. Use colors that are commonly used for those clothes, but also pay a key amount of attention to how the colors befit your characters. You must be wondering how to do this, so let me explain the best I can.
      Positive colors are best on a more spirited and vibrant country, it reflects on their personality. Also, each color and its various shades have particular meanings that they portray.  However, some have "double standards". For example:

      "Positive" Colors:
      Orange and Orange shades- Childlike, Vibrant, Energetic, 'Happy', Social, loud, frivolous.

      Red and Red shades- Mature, strong, passionate, aggressive, temperamental, warlike, dangerous, courageous.

      Pinks and Pink shade- Playful, flirty, gaudy, cozy, wild, fragile, sweet, tender.

      Greens and Green Shades- Young, natural, healthy, energetic, soothing, balanced, restful.

      Blues and Blue Shades- Faithful, water, coolness, dreamy, soft, faithful, sophisticated, confident, cold, distant.

      Light Browns and Creamy Shades- Woodsy, Exotic, welcoming, rustic.

      Earthy Browns- Delicious, warm, wholesome, earthy

      Golds-Rich, Expensive, royal, gaudy.

      Yellow and Yellow shades-Hospitable, Summer, energetic, cowardly, betrayal, hazardous.

      Light Purple and Pale Purple Shades- Wistful, thoughtful, peaceful, romantic, fanciful.

      Now, for 'negative' colors. Negative colors are actually values, which are blacks and greys.

      Negetive Colors [Values]

      Black-Loss, Mystery, Destruction, misery, death, mourning, bold, classic, strong, invulnerable.

      Greys- Sleek, classy, dust, ash, destruction, death, corpses, modern, dull, tired, relaxed.

      Now that we know some of the basics of colors and their interpretations, lets start on creating a color scheme.

      Color Schemes

      With creating a color scheme for a character, you must focus on which colors not only match the characters personality, but their general appearance and complexion as well. Neon pink and orange with green hair is scalding to the eyes, so try and keep it 'simple'. By simple, I mean choose colors that are near each other in the color spectrum. For those that read Homestuck, you'll get this color process easily, think of it as the hemospectrum. 
      Typically, colors that share the same base color [i.e. Red==>Deep Red, Blue==>Pale Blue] go well together. Using colors of the same base with different saturation levels typically leads to good out-comes for a color scheme.
      Here's one using colors of the same base:

      When you have the process of creating schemes from a singular base color, start mixing and matching! Use different colors at different saturation's and values to create vibrant and complementary schemes. Here are some examples:

      Now, as for "conflicting colors" [colors that clash far too much], they can meld well together when toned/watered down from their base form. For example, red and blue do not go well together unless they are done in different hues. Here's a very basic example:

      You see, colors that typically clash are usually located across from each other on the color wheel. When these colors are 'toned down', they complement each other beautifully. Here's a little diagram so you get what I mean:

      Analogous colors tend to blend into each other gradually at different saturations. The use of Analogous colors is recommended with scenery and backgrounds especially. 
      Ah, I hope this guide helped somewhat. Here are some colors for you to start testing out your color scheme skills on:

      History formatting 

      Now that we've gotten past the general appearance and personality, we need to work on the history.
      First and foremost, do not rely on Wiki for everything. Use at least four different sites for general information, then look up information on individual sites of individual era's and occurrences in your OC's history in order to get as much information as possible and cross check information encase you got something wrong. Building your OC is a growing process, so your OC's profile will be ever changing.
      Moreover, do not start and focus your OC's history on it's Colonial Period if it has had multiple civilizations prior to colonization. Though cases will vary depending on countries, a very basic general template to use would be something like this:
        • Ancient Civilizations
        • Colonization (if applicable)
        • Independence (if applicable)
        • Modern Day.

        Along with history comes relationships. This is a sticky subject, because relationships can either be exaggerated or overlooked.
        I'm going to mainly touch on relationships that you may consider to be romantic and what to/what not to do. Consider the following:
          • How long have the countries known each other and how strong are their relations?
          • Is the country your OC's colonizer? 
          • Was the relationship between colonizer and colony good or bad?
          • Did the revolution of your OC (if applicable) result in a soured relationship?
          • Does your OC and a country have a love/hate relationship?
          • Does your OC even have any relations with the country.
          • Are their relations more than just having an embassy?

          Now, here are the deadly sins of creating relations:
            • Do NOT make love/hate relationships "I hate you baka jk ilu long time".
            • Do not make a ship in which an imperialistic country wreaked havoc on your OC and then justify it with Stockholm Syndrome. Abuse is neither funny nor romantic
            • Do not make up relations for the sake of shipping your OC with your favorite character.
            • Do NOT have your OC call it's colonizer "papa/mama" if they had a history prior to colonization.

            The rest is up to you, but here are some good guidelines.

            Skirts and Dresses

            :bulletred:When making an OC, you should have three basic outfits:
              • Military (if applicable)
              • Traditional (if applicable, and varying depending on the OC and their traditions)
              • Casual (usually common clothing of the people there or a simplified version of the traditional attire (be sure to state if it is a simplified version or not. Pheakdei [Cambodia] wears a combination of simplified and casual clothing]
              :bulletred:If your OC is wearing a skirt or dress, consider the following:
                • Is the length and style appropriate for their climate?
                • Is the length and style appropriate for their social formalities or religion? (i.e., many middle Eastern countries require the women to reveal very little skin)
                • Is the style common for that country?

                :bulletred:Here is a chart on skirt lengths:
                :bulletred: And here is a guide on skirt styles.

                :bulletred: Remember, this is only applicable to certain countries and on whether or not the OC is wearing casuals. It is a tricky subject so be sure to look up on whether or not people still dress very traditionally day-to-day or what the acceptable casuals are. Also please remember if you choose a traditional dress it may be inaccurate due to certain ethnic minorities in certain countries.

                Hair design

                :bulletred:What sort of hair does your OC have and what sort of hair is typical to people of their country? Here are some hair kinds to consider:

                :bulletred:While I will be continually adding to this section, lets look at some braided styles that would look nice on certain OC's and are unique.

                Braided hairstyle ideas

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                I know this is very lengthy, but I hope it helps! If you have any questions, comment here.
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                MiyukiKudo Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
                Uh.. Thank you very much for creating this! Gotta save this somehow!

                Uh.. So I have a question, I have a Philippines OC who looks like this:

                I gave her curly(I guess its on the more Wavy side but still curly than that) + Straight hair because I want to show diversity of the people.
                This came from my lessons when I was in Grade 2. The first one to land in the Philippines were the Negritos, who had curly hair. Second would be the Indones who had straight hair and Malays who had straight hair too

                Theres also this poem I remember reading where The spaniards describe Filipina's with straight, jet black, silky hair
                So I mixed both of these to make my Philippines OC have unique hair.

                Should I change her hairstyle or not?
                Othelle Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015
                Wow, this is amazing, and I can't thank you enough.
                When in the Hetalia fandom, as soon as you hear the word OC you cringe, which is sad, because there are some OCs that are so good.
                Also, do you have any advice on how to make micronation OCs? I've picked out the ones I want to do (I hardly see any anymore!) and there are quite a few. I've got all their names down (micronation and human names) but it's so hard to think up a personality, because the only information I really find on them is the Wikipedia article, which isn't too helpful!
                So if you have any advice about that, please tell me c:
                Anyways, this was great so thanks for taking time out of your day to do this! I'm sure it's helped lots of people!
                Cupcakequeen16 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
                Wonderful OC advice! 
                flor-de-maga Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
                (What, what is this? This is perfect. Why don't enough people see this?

                And wow...thank you for that description of disorders. It's really helpful.)
                Hetabee Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
                Oh wow, this post was huge! But it's very helpful (even though my OC is a state that I've been revising for a couple years now...) and I'll definitely have to use this to sort out a lot of things before I try to move on to any more states. Though, I have a couple questions about appearance and such, if you don't mind me asking. :)
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Feel free to ask. UwU
                Hetabee Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
                Okay, well, my OC is of Pennsylvania and I've been tweaking his design repeatedly to fit the three most prevalent groups of his ancestry, the top three being German, Irish and Italian. So with that I changed his formerly blonde hair and blue yes, to red hair and hazel eyes. I chose that because of the array of Celtic countries that show up in the genealogy. But does that sound right? Because I'm not entirely sure that would be right to represent the enitre region, though in that case I figured he would just have brown hair and brown eyes. I don't know. :shrug:

                And another thing, instead of having his last name as Jones like most of the other states I see, I made it Smith because of it's trend of use in English and Irish descendants and it's pretty common in America. It means "to smite, strike" and was used to refer to blacksmiths and other men who worked with metal, so him being a state known for coal and steel mines, I thought it would fit. Also, since all of the roots mixed into one state vary greatly I don't think the name Jones fits for each and every place, if that makes any sense. :U
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((I agree with what you said about the surname Jones, so I'm glad you chose Smith with some information to back it up. As for the hair and eyes, I think the colour palette is good as you described so far, it just depends on the vibrancy of either colours. If you want, I can link you to different examples of ginger hair and hazel eyes so you can have a better idea on exactly what shade you'd prefer (I.e., some hazel eyes are often actually honey coloured which is a vibrant mix between hazel and pale brown)
                All in all, he sounds good so far! :D
                Hetabee Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
                Ah, right, well that's the thing... Once I flat color it from the beginning you can't tell what that original color was because of the light effects I put on it (likely too much? same for his eyes... ^^;) Oh yes, please. I would really appreciate that. Thank you so much. :meow:
                Westlywheatly Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
                Hi I have a quick question about colonizing and they shouldn't look like the person who colonized them. Well I'm doing an Oc, Slovakia and she was colonized and influenced by Hungary I made them have similar hair colors to represent that. But because they don't like each other I made my Oc not enjoy her hair color. Is that bad? Also another thing with colonizing is when an Oc you never want to call them "papa" or "mama" but again there is a high influence on Slovaks from Austrians and as a joke I wanted to add when Austria really helped Slovakia be part of the European Union as "finally trying to act like a father figure" with * those around it. Bad idea again? And sorry for how long this was thank you for reading it. This really did help me realize some faults with my characters thank you again and I hope you have a great day :).
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Its more suggested that you'd look into the most common hair colour for your Ocs ethnicity. If the most common colour is indeed similar to Hungary than the reason of your Oc disliking her hair is indeed feasible and an interesting facet of them.

                While donning the "father figure" is a tad precarious (more so than a sibling figure), it should be fine as long as you stress the fact that she doesn't see him as a literal father. Duration of influence and significance of time can also influence this so be wary. Some things to consider would be :

                • Are there any relations that are more significant to your Oc in the light of a guide or parental influence


                • How are their current day relations? A soured relationship may make your Oc less likely to still view them in a famial way.

                While I'd suggest a brother/sibling figure rather than father, its up to you, really. I hope this helped some, but if you have anymore questions don't hesitate to ask! UwU
                Westlywheatly Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
                Thanks it is the same as Hungary, and your really a huge help *~*. On that note are these to diffrent to be called similar

                so implying that's Austria's taking responsibility for his past actions, ect. Would be a better way to put it then, but again she doesn't really have a different father figure, but I'll go with the responsibility one.

                thank you so much for helping me, this may seem short compaired to all the help and tips you gave me but I really do appreciate it and it's a big help for me. I could use all the advise you'll be willing to offer but here's an odd one, czech republic being a guy? I'd like to know your thoughts about the idea. 
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Hmmmm... It is similar but as far as her dislike of her hair due to being similar to Hungary, it'd be advisable to hint that the similarity annoys her whenever the two have to converse with one another or when either or gets mistooken for the other . However, that doesn't go to say it'd be best to have her hate her hair 24/7.

                A male Czech would intrigue me since so many are female. Depending on how its done, I'll be interested in seeing him.
                Westlywheatly Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
                Yea, thanks ^^ if someone really hated their hair 24/7 they should really dye it :P (your really good at making these) 

                And thanks for the advise again, I'll make sure to send you a note if I have anymore questions ^^ thank you so much. 
                Domovina-Hrvata Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
                ((I got to admit
                this helped me so much into doing a re-design of my OC. Oh the shameful past when she was not as though through and had episodes of blushing every 10 minutes-//corner of shame
                So thank you, thank you very much for putting me on the right trail!
                tho some relations are really hard to find- ))
                Little-Red-Coat Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                When they give the oc schizo it makes me angered
                really angry....loosing touch with reality isnt fun
                so why represent a country with the personification with a disorder?
                like for real.
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((ugh same. I'm majoring in psychology, and have had to observe schizophrenics quite frequently. I get irked to the max when I see someone all "hehehe I can see fairies too like England because I have schizophrenia!!1!!"

                Haha no, most schizophrenics have malevolent visions of killing or injuring people (I was attacked an bitten by a seemingly calm patient who had always acted fond of me. She said her "friend" behind me told her to. As you can guess there was nothing behind me)
                Moreover, very advanced cases can barely form a sensible or coherent sentences, usually jumbling up words and thoughts, something we typically just call "word salad".
                Mental disorders in APH OCs bother me so much ugh . Especially when they're done tastelessly.
                Parasitic-Enigma Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Writer
                Wow!This is such a helpful post!<3 You really thought this through.I'm so using this.
                Theres not enough of these for Hetalia Fc's nowadays.Which is one of the reasons why erm...'Mary-Suiesh' characters exist.Most people don;t bother giving advice and instead slap the label then walk away which is pretty awful. :/
                 Although,may I ask a question?
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((I'm glad it helps! Ah, sorry for taking so long to reply, I was on a trip.
                And sure, ask away.UwU
                Parasitic-Enigma Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Writer
                Well....I  thought of the  C.S.A.,or Confederate States of America,possibly having red hair.
                According to various sources I found 75% of the American South was Scottish during the Civil War,living all in South and especially Virgina  and the Carolinas,plus major influences of Scotland being the Confederate battleflag,(Crosses) and Scotland county today in North Carolina.Examples of red haired Confederates being George Mayfield,and Col. Randal William McGavock Also a Since it is in Hetalia,is possible that Confederate could have red hair for the Scottish influence,or not?
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Ahmm... It is very probable that they'd have hair of a red hue [you have some good sources of influence listed here]. However, be sure the shade of red isn't too vibrant, but a toned down/realistic shade. Many natural red heads have hair ranging anywhere from pale orange blonde [strawberry blonde], to golden orange, to deep red, almost russet in color. So red hair would be very probable, but the shade of red would be a critical feature. If you have sketches, I can help you develop a color pallet if needed. UwU
                I'd recommend a russet color, but its really up to you!
                Parasitic-Enigma Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Writer
                Aha,thank you.^^I have more sources and they're found here- an-angels-teardrops.deviantart… Although it was rushed and happens to use little of my own words.I want to clear up reasons as to why soon though more cleanly in her bio.I thought of using blonde but most every Confederate character i've seen is blonde...But in a sense,I wanted a character that stood out but still stay accurate.So far I've kept her in this… But of course,that might change.:XD: And I thought of light green eyes for British influence and the two largest exports for the Tobacco and Cotton(Their leaves usually being brownish green),plus the fact many of the agriculture being larger than the industry,leading to fields upon fields.

                 But also thank you for the advice.And I might take you up on the  color pallet.<3 Sadly,though,I can not draw but write.
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((No problem! While that shade of red is a little bright, but light green eyes are fine as long as they don't tread into the neon zone. UwU
                Writing is more difficult, but characters many of the most famous character's in books are simply the OC's of normal people! Writing can bring a character to life in the mind of other's, so it's perfectly fine if you write rather than draw! In that case, I could probably link you to words that would vividly describe her appearance without being cliche since writing is pretty difficult! By the by, I found this chart with different hair colors and different shades of red, I think one is pretty close to the link you showed me:
                Parasitic-Enigma Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Writer
                 Possibly this color?…

                Yes,it could.You have valid points.<3 Although more often then not fan-fiction stories are not read nowadays......In general,its more about....Self Inserts and sex.Nothing wrong with those really,but they DO get more attention.^^;
                 I have some stories that are on my page.Although I personally don't believe I am any good.I will link the though if you like.And yes,please link the vivid words!I really need them.Always room for improvement!

                Oooh!I do see some that are close to the color.<3 Summer berry could possibly work.xD
                I'll have to look at these colors online some more.^^ Thank you once again!
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((No worries! I'm glad to help! Ahmmmm... those green eyes may be alright, though a more mellowed shade of green bordering hazel would be advised considering green eyes are somewhat recessive and tend to blend with brown or blue rather than being overpoweringly prominent in their own standing. Perhaps something like… or…? Whatever is fine with you, these are only suggestions.:D

                Ugh, to be honest I'm not a huge fan of the self-inserts and sex fics that occur now-a-days. Granted they're supposed to be self-indulgent for some but the diction tends to be crass and repetitive. >n>
                Ah! I looked up a decent source for help with writing if need be!

                This seems to be teeming with a hefty amount of references, so I hope it helps! Ah, if you ever need help designing appearance I could help sketch her out, or, rather, if you ever want something proof-read on her development/fanfic of her, I'd be glad to help! Though, English is my first language so my deduction of syntax may be slightly erroneous at times in its own right.^^;
                kyuzoaoi Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Artist
                Looks it would help me in the long run. I need to revise my Manchuria OC.
                Kaba-Ma-Kyei Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
                (Oh wow.. This is such a great guide!

                Although.. I need a bit of help thoroughly sorting this character, well.. Personality-wise. 
                Do you think you could help me out a bit?)
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Of course! Do you have a basis for the character personality wise so far or would you like to sort of start from scratch from the personality and gradually build it up/flesh him out?
                Kaba-Ma-Kyei Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
                (Woah- I apologize, I've been off this account for a while! 
                Hm.. Now that I think about, I did have a personality for him, I mostly base my character's personalities off of their history/current governments/influences and what not, rather than how the people are in general..)
                blithebeats Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Filmographer
                oh my god im SO glad you put emphasis on the oppressor/oppressed relationship between colonizer and colonized countries. i see so many OCs that 'sympathize' and take major influence from their colonizers where its not appropriate, its so gross
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((I'm glad you agree! It's really true though. Many peoples first mistakes when creating a Hetalia OC is having their OC overly attach, associate with, or sympathize with their colonizer. They usually don't take into consideration that the colonizers might have been totalitarian in nature and severely oppressed the natives as well as forced them to assimilate into said colonizers societal ways. Another irksome aspect is when some disregard the oppressive nature of a colonizer and dub the colonizer as the 'parent' when a nation has probably been around far prior to colonization.
                PenguRin Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
                Wow this was extremely helpful! Thank you!
                It's something I can definitely refer to when creating OCs! <3
                A great guide!
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Hope it helps, and glad you like it!:D I'd love to see the OC's you make using it. UwU
                PenguRin Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
                It's great! c:
                X-I-L2048 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
                Ooo, all that hairstyle and clothing ref! 83 This must have taken you awhile to compile, too. Major props. :iconsaluteplz: I do agree with most of these points, too. On the heterochomia thing, while I concur that the vast majority of the time it would not make sense for a country to have it, particularly RL OCs... I actually do have two OCs who have it. ^^; HOWEVER, the reasons for this is as follows:

                1) They are crossover OCs, so it's not actual real life countries I'm personifying

                2) They are the personifications of planets, colonized by the last remnants of humanity that made it off Earth before it was completely drained of resources. There was no "ancient civilization" to base them off of, because there was literally no one there before the planets were terraformed and settled.

                3) Therefore, for these two OCs, their physical appearances are a genetic mishmash because of the myriad cultures and ethnicities that settled them. Their eyes are just one more way for me to reflect this, as is their skin colors, hair colors, etc.

                So yeah. I gave them heterochromia because of extenuating circumstances and because it fit in my mind. Wouldn't recommend it for most OCs, tho. Most of the time you couldn't make it make enough sense.
                inahorange Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
                omg this is awesome! This must have taken you a while to type and this is a great guide because this can really help people who are new to creating and improving their hetalia OCs! I really like how you pointed out things your OC shouldn't have and you even explained the misunderstood syndromes! The last part about shipping was neat too, a lot of people need to realize their OC isn't a kawaii desu shipping character and there has to have some sense into the pairing at least. Bless you for writing this asdfgh <3
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Yeah, it took a bit to compile the information in a not-so demeaning/hypocritical way which people tend to do when making guides; I stuck to facts for the most part and tried to touch on issues I've seen within the fandom. OuQ
                Sooner or later I'll do a hairstyle guide to make designing hair styles easier for those who are new to the fandom OTL
                But I'm glad you like it and hope it helps! ;u;
                Renn-T Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
                omg thank you thank you, this is perfect ;7;//
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((ahuu, you're welcome! Hope it helps if you need it! OuO)/''
                F-rostyy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
                :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz:

                YOU GET ALL THE LOVE! ALL OF IT!

                 This post is so detailed and perfect. Let's hope it opens people's eyes. 

                Thank you so much for posting this. 
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Ahuu, thanks. UwU I did a fair amount of research, but will be continually adding to the guide based on issues I see. ouo;;
                F-rostyy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
                owo Good, but for the OC secelction don't for get the Americas…
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                (( Ah, thanks! I just added the link. UwU
                F-rostyy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
                No problem! ^^ I hope many people are inspired by this journal.
                melonstyle Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014

                i remember seeing a lot of these points before, but I notice added stuff too! very nice BDD
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((I will be adding to this forever though sob;;
                Sooner or later I'll put up a character analysis test, a trait balancing test, and a qualities/faults balancing test link...
                melonstyle Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
                lmao well it makes sense to--

                good luck with updates on this! ^^
                Frozen-Q Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
                { Thank you. Thank you so much omg ::-;; 
                and theres finally someone who mentions that there are more than one heterochromia type- }}
                Prateh-Kampuchea Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
                ((Ahuu, glad you like it. UwU
                Yeah, I wanted to educate people in brief on the different types of heterochromia types and the causes of it.
                NerdyJones Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
                did you get.
                the pantience to do this omg
                I will fav this forever and ever.
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